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The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The depicted chart illustrates the division of
students
 of six various art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.
Students
 are classified referring to their gender. You can see six different art categories: linguistics, philosophy, English language and literature, history and
archeology
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, art and design, and
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last
, communication and media stud. It can clearly be seen that philosophy
occured
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 as the subject chosen by the fewest male
students
 (50
students
),
while
 English language and literature was the most common choice in males (230
students
).
In contrast
, female
students
chosed
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 history and
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 at least; their favourite
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 was as well English language and literature (250
students
), closely followed by linguistics (240
students
), and communication and media stud (225
students
). As a remarkable fact, any subject was more likely to be voted by females except art and design.
Overall
, women accounted for the most
students
 in art-related subjects in total,
whereas
 men constituted the minority.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • art-related subjects
  • gender distribution
  • predominate
  • significant
  • gender imbalances
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • balanced distribution
  • data
  • figures
  • trends
  • popular
  • least popular
  • subject choices
  • analyze
  • overview
  • summarize
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