The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table and pie charts provide information about money given by different sources and spent by the British police in 2017 and 2018.
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, the National Government was the most active sponsor in
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resources that were received from other sources brought in the least sum.
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, paying the salaries of workers was the most popular way to spend money, at the same time technology has taken the
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position in the priorities rate.
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the table, National Government has shown the largest support and has provided more than 175 and 177 million in 2017 and 2018 respectively. Local taxes were not the least donator and in
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gave around $100 m. (speaking in details 91,2 and 102,3 million). Other sources were less effective, but have
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paid nearly 38 million dollars each year.
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, the total figures for donations have grown and reached 318.6m in 2018 compared to 304.7m in 2017. As shown in the pie charts, money was spent on three specific purposes
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as salaries , technology , buildings and transport. The total tendency has remained unchanged and in
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income for officers and other staff was the most required need,
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, salaries were exactly 3/4 of budget spending in 2017 and 69% in 2018. The percentage for buildings and vehicles remained the same and constituted 17% in
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words both, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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