THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

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The three pie charts below give information about the percentages of three kinds of nutrients in typical meals.

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, the sodium and saturated fat content are high in dinners with 47% and 37% respectively. As for the added sugar is the most contain in snacks with 42% of the total. At breakfast, all kinds of nutrition are low.

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, the amount of sodium in snacks is poor at 14%. When it comes to lunch, the percentages of sodium constitute only 29%, saturated fat cover 26% and added sugar rest 19% of the entire pie.

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, the quantity of

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that are saturated fat and added sugar is the lowest in breakfast with 16% each of the total.

To sum up

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, apart from breakfast and snacks, all other kinds of meals include lower nutrients.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

133 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutrients
average percentage
sodium
saturated fat
added sugar
unhealthy
intake
typical meals
breakfast
lunch
dinner
snacks
contribute
health implications
convenience
taste preferences
cultural habits
balance nutrient intake
maintain a healthy diet

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THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

Nowadays, people all over the world are spending more and more time apart from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that children should start formal education as early as possible, where as other people think children should not start until the age of Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the word. what are the causes of it? and what solution do you offer?

Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have a greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.