The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the kinds of propose that make individuals travel from the city centre of the country
such
as,
study ,work, adventure or living as a family,over the 15 periods.
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overall
perspective,studying and working are the main causes that make people decide to change their place to find a new chance ,However
, the highest pr
cent was people moves by employment.
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According to
the chart given , it can be seen clearly that, study and work immigration percentage is the near employment started in the early period in 2000 over 80000 people was moved
subsequences study pupils,at a rate 8000 at the same time .while
the proportion of workers has a slight decline , both of them stood at the end
of 2015 .family moving observed has elite and gradually increased from the beginning to be in rate 2000 at 2015.Submitted by Ssaraan2017 on
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