The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table gives information about the percentages of students who were enrolled
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four types of secondary
schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the teens choosing to study at community
schools
gained greater popularity over the period shown,
whereas
the proportion of studying at voluntary-controlled
school
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witnessed a significant decline. In 2000, approximately half of
pupils
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prefered
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preferred
to study at voluntary-controlled
schools
,
while
the figure decreased to 38% in 2005 and
finally
to 20%
after
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9 years later.
By contrast
, around one-tenth of secondary students studied at community
schools
, which rose by three times after 5 years later and almost 5 times in 2009, standing at 58%.
Although
the proportion of studying at grammar
schools
cut in half during 9 years, declining from 24% to 12%, it nearly remained stable for those studying at specialist
schools
, at 12% in 2000, 11% in 2005 and 10% in 2009, respectively.
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