The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table gives information concerning the proportion of
students
to attend
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four secondary school types from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportion of pupils attending
voluntary-controllled
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voluntary-controlled
schools
declined the most. Meanwhile, the share of
students
attending community
schools
increased the most. Looking at the table more closely, one can see that the
voluntary-controllled
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voluntary-controlled
voluntary-control
schools
had the highest rate of
students
among the four types of
schools
. the figure was more than 50%.
In contrast
, the share of
students
in specialist
schools
and community
schools
was 12%.
after
this
time the volume of
students
in specialist
schools
remained constant over the period. But community
schools
had
significant
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increase in the number of pupils in 2009. The figure was almost five times higher than in 2000. The proportion of Grammar
schools
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students
in 2000 has halved compared to 2000. In 2009, the size of three
type
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of
schools
(specialist, grammar,
voluntary-controllled
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voluntary-controlled
) combined(42%) was smaller than the volume of pupils attending
voluntary-controllled
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voluntary-controlled
schools
(58%).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, schools with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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