The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table gives information concerning the proportion of
students
to attend to
four secondary school types from 2000 to 2009.
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Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion of pupils attending voluntary-controllled
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voluntary-controlled
schools
declined the most. Meanwhile, the share of students
attending community schools
increased the most.
Looking at the table more closely, one can see that the voluntary-controllled
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voluntary-controlled
voluntary-control
schools
had the highest rate of students
among the four types of schools
. the figure was more than 50%. In contrast
, the share of students
in specialist schools
and community schools
was 12%. after
this
time the volume of students
in specialist schools
remained constant over the period. But community schools
had significant
increase in the number of pupils in 2009. The figure was almost five times higher than in 2000. The proportion of Grammar Add an article
a significant
schools
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school
students
in 2000 has halved compared to 2000. In 2009, the size of three type
of Change to a plural noun
types
schools
(specialist, grammar, voluntary-controllled
) combined(42%) was smaller than the volume of pupils attendingCorrect your spelling
voluntary-controlled
voluntary-controllled
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voluntary-controlled
schools
(58%).Submitted by ku-hmi on
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