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The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment in six categories divided into manualand non-manual occupations.

The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment in six categories divided into manualand non-manual occupations.
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The pie charts give information about the
proportoin
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proportion
males
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of males
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 and females in employment in six categories divided into
manualand
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manual and
 non-manual
occupations
. A glance at the graphs reveals that
a
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 greatest
persentage
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percentage
 of
women
work
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who work
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 in
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the non-
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non- manual
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non-manual
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 profession than work in manual professions,
while
 the share of
men
 in both
occupations
 is almost
a
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half. In the non-manual
occupations
 , there is a small
percentage
 of
women
 than
men
 employed in managerial and professional parts,
whereas
 a greater
percentage
 of
women
 than
men
 are found in clerical or related
worss
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words
. The
propotion
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proportion
 of
women
 in other non-manual works is
sighnificantly
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significantly
 larger than the
percentage
 of
men
 in these
occupations
. In manual
occupations
, the
biigeest
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biggest
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the two sexes is in the job of craft or similar workers , where males are 24% of all employees and females are just 3%.
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In
 addition, the percentages of
women
 and
men
 working as general labourers are very small, only 1% and 2% respectively. There is not a large
diference
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difference
 between the
percentage
 of
men
 doing
the
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manual work (26%) and
women
 in these jobs (27%).
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