Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people have different views that they should just repeat doing the same
things
or consider
change
is always beneficial. In my opinion,
changes
may have several advantages, I believe that it will be better if
things
remain unchanged.
On the other hand
,
changes
have some benefits.
Change
is an occasion to learn more new
things
and develop. From the ancient
time
to
modern
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the modern
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age, humans always
change
to adapt
with
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to
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the environment and society.
For example
, humans have no strength as elephants, no claws as tigers and they had to
change
, by inventing weapons and tools, to survive over hard
time
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times
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. In modern life,
change
is
also
a way to surpass the opponent.
For example
, in
candy
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the candy
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industry, people keep producing new sorts of candy, with many tastes,
color
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colors
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,
ingredients
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and ingredients
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,… to surpass the competitive company. On the one hand, I believe that that keep repeating day by day is more advantageous. By repeating the same
things
, people will not have any threat or damage
because
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ofbecause
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the lack of experience.
Moreover
, they certainly feel less
stressful
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stressed
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due to
do not need to spend
time
and will on dealing with
change
’s problems.
In addition
,
changes
do not relate
with
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to
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good
things
.
For example
,
in
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during
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COVID-19
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the COVID-19
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pandemic, many new
changes
such
as social
distance
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distancing
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,
online
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and online
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education,… and none of them brings greater benefits than the previous
time
. In conclusion,
changes
may have several benefits,
I
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but I
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still think that an unchanged lifestyle is better.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • status quo
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • mastery
  • innovation
  • adaptability
  • personal growth
  • resilience
  • hesitancy
  • risk-taking
  • transitions
  • enrichment
  • equilibrium
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