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The chart below gives information on agricultural exports from the United States in 2019 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information on agricultural exports from the United States in 2019 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the US's profits coming from agricultural
exports
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 between 2019 and 2020.
Overall
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, each product gained the US more
money
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 in 2020 than in 2019,
also
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 selling soybeans brought the highest amount of
money
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 in both years. To commence, pork, and corn
exports
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 gained the US relatively the same amount of
money
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 in both years, staying between 5 and 10
billion
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dollars
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;
nevertheless
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, the income coming from the soybean
exports
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 far exceeded that of others and corresponds to just over 25
billion
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dollars
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 in 2020, just under 20
billion
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dollars
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 in 2019. Beef
exports
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 gained the US the least amount of
money
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, reaching just above 5
billion
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dollars
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 in both years.
While
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 there is a slight increase, approximately 1
billion
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dollars
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, in the US's profit coming from the sales of beef, pork, and corn,
this
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 difference in the income coming from the sale of soybeans was much more considerable, increasing by nearly 5
billion
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dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, money, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • agricultural exports
  • trend analysis
  • export values
  • significant growth or decline
  • leading agricultural products
  • market demand
  • weather conditions
  • international trade policies
  • summarize
  • potential reasons
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