Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cuitural differences Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The traditions,

customs

,

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and behaviours of the

countries

depend

from

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one another. Some People undergo that

foriegners

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foreigners

are

mandotory

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mandatory

to follow the local

customs

and

behavfours

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behaviours

while

others disagree with it. I fully disagree with the above statement. The following paragraphs will discuss the behaviours of

foriegners

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foreigners

when they

visit

to

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another

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another country

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countries

. Meanwhile, without any traditions and

customs

or any restrictions for the

foriegners

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foreigners

except the government rules the tourists will

visit

our grace

as well as

the

economic

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of the

country

will

also

get

rised

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rise

. The tourists will have an excitement to

visit

the

countries

with

less

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rules and regulations.

For instance

, the behaviour when it comes to

the

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dressing sense they should compulsorily stick to

wear

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wearing

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neat and decent

cloths

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clothes

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when they

uisit

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visit

to religious

places

. All the above have mentioned the behaviours and obey the religious

customs

in relevant

countries

. Apart from that the nation can be able to attract more

foriegners

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foreigners

to

visit

our

places

and get a good name for the

country

. If it's possible to have

a

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good hospitality and

managment

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management

the visitors will be delighted

as well as

again they will have an

exitement

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excitement

to

visit

the

places

and if theirs'

an

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opportunity to customize their needs,wants and other

stuffs

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the

visftors

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visitors

will appreciate it. As a good result, having a good tourist attraction and a better

managment

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management

will lead to

cherish

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our

country

and raise

up

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the

economic

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of the

country

gradually. I totally disagree with the above statement because visitors should have

their

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freedom to enjoy their time. And

also

to make them feel good and safe to stay in their destination that they want.

Furthermore

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the local

Customs

and

benaviours

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behaviours

behaviour

will

highly

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judged when it comes to religious

places

, I highly recommend

to reduce

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the set of rules and

let

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the visitors

to

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have their time with their loved

in

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their expected ways.