Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history.

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The lack of knowledge about the country's
history
of a part younger today is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world.
This
essay will examine the causes and various solutions that could be taken to improve the situation. There are a variety of different causes for
this
matter of
this
phenomenon.
To begin
with, today social
media
to seem forget national
history
gradually
while
entertaining
information
about International pop or movie stars is increasing every day. In fact, nowadays between giving
information
about historical
people
so receiving a trivial payment from the government and posting entertaining news,
therefore
receiving large money from celebrities almost
media
companies choose to report about International pop and Hollywood stars.
For
example
, Ms Nguyen Thu Dung who is a manager of a large company in VN in the social
media
field admits that they usually don’t spend much attention on
History
because it isn’t given them worthy payment. Another contributing factor to mention is that schools and the government
don’t
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have an effective and interesting way to attract young
people
to learn the
history
of their minority.
For
example
, it is admitted by a part of
students
that
while
students
always want to discover about historical
people
interestingly
instead
of learning by heart, schools do nothing without compelling
students
to commit
history
to memory. Despite these circumstances, there are several measures that governments and individuals could take to solve the problems.
Firstly
, a simple solution would be to change the teaching way at school. If the government really want
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teenager to attend national
History
, a more effective and interesting should be given to children. A good illustration is
according to
educational research in 2021, 60% of
students
admitted that learning
history
through Video with live pictures and sound is well than committing all to memory at school. The second measure would be for governments to facilitate youngers to discover the
history
of their minority. In fact, it is really very well for
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teenager to learn about
people
in their national
history
if more historical exhibition is organized or museum ticket cost is decreased.
For
example
, Minh who is my brother admitted that he and some of his friends very want to join a
history
exhibition about heroes of Vietnamese
history
at Ho Chi Minh Museum but the cost of the ticket is too expensive,
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when the cost is decreased, they can join to that exhibition.
Finally
,
Information
about
history
should appear popularly on the
Internet
and social
media
and social
media
should spend more attention on national
history
.
For
example
,
last
month I had homework about
history
but I couldn’t find
information
and data on the
Internet
, It has nothing on the
Internet
and I wished it had more historical formation on the
Internet
. In conclusion, younger short acknowledge about the
history
of the country is a big problem that affects a lot of
people
nowadays. It’s mainly caused by the boring way of teaching in schools and the short attention of social
media
.
However
, various solutions can be taken to tackle the issue to reduce the effects it is having on the current society.
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