Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history.
The lack of knowledge about the country's
history
of a part younger today is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world. This
essay will examine the causes and various solutions that could be taken to improve the situation.
There are a variety of different causes for this
matter of this
phenomenon. To begin
with, today social media
to seem forget national history
gradually while
entertaining information
about International pop or movie stars is increasing every day. In fact, nowadays between giving information
about historical people
so receiving a trivial payment from the government and posting entertaining news, therefore
receiving large money from celebrities almost media
companies choose to report about International pop and Hollywood stars. For
example
, Ms Nguyen Thu Dung who is a manager of a large company in VN in the social media
field admits that they usually don’t spend much attention on History
because it isn’t given them worthy payment. Another contributing factor to mention is that schools and the government don’t
have an effective and interesting way to attract young Correct your spelling
won’t
people
to learn the history
of their minority. For
example
, it is admitted by a part of students
that while
students
always want to discover about historical people
interestingly instead
of learning by heart, schools do nothing without compelling students
to commit history
to memory.
Despite these circumstances, there are several measures that governments and individuals could take to solve the problems. Firstly
, a simple solution would be to change the teaching way at school. If the government really want the
teenager to attend national Correct article usage
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History
, a more effective and interesting should be given to children. A good illustration is according to
educational research in 2021, 60% of students
admitted that learning history
through Video with live pictures and sound is well than committing all to memory at school. The second measure would be for governments to facilitate youngers to discover the history
of their minority. In fact, it is really very well for the
teenager to learn about Correct article usage
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people
in their national history
if more historical exhibition is organized or museum ticket cost is decreased. For
example
, Minh who is my brother admitted that he and some of his friends very want to join a history
exhibition about heroes of Vietnamese history
at Ho Chi Minh Museum but the cost of the ticket is too expensive,,
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apply
however
when the cost is decreased, they can join to that exhibition. Add a comma
,however
Finally
, Information
about history
should appear popularly on the Internet
and social media
and social media
should spend more attention on national history
. For
example
, last
month I had homework about history
but I couldn’t find information
and data on the Internet
, It has nothing on the Internet
and I wished it had more historical formation on the Internet
.
In conclusion, younger short acknowledge about the history
of the country is a big problem that affects a lot of people
nowadays. It’s mainly caused by the boring way of teaching in schools and the short attention of social media
.However
, various solutions can be taken to tackle the issue to reduce the effects it is having on the current society.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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