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Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history.

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The lack of knowledge about the country's
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 of a part younger today is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world.
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 essay will examine the causes and various solutions that could be taken to improve the situation. There are a variety of different causes for
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 phenomenon.
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 with, today social
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 to seem forget national
history
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 gradually
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 entertaining
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 about International pop or movie stars is increasing every day. In fact, nowadays between giving
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 about historical
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 so receiving a trivial payment from the government and posting entertaining news,
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 receiving large money from celebrities almost
media
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 companies choose to report about International pop and Hollywood stars.
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, Ms Nguyen Thu Dung who is a manager of a large company in VN in the social
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 field admits that they usually don’t spend much attention on
History
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 because it isn’t given them worthy payment. Another contributing factor to mention is that schools and the government
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 have an effective and interesting way to attract young
people
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 to learn the
history
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 of their minority.
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, it is admitted by a part of
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 that
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students
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 always want to discover about historical
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 interestingly
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 of learning by heart, schools do nothing without compelling
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 to commit
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 to memory. Despite these circumstances, there are several measures that governments and individuals could take to solve the problems.
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, a simple solution would be to change the teaching way at school. If the government really want
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teenager to attend national
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, a more effective and interesting should be given to children. A good illustration is
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 educational research in 2021, 60% of
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 admitted that learning
history
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 through Video with live pictures and sound is well than committing all to memory at school. The second measure would be for governments to facilitate youngers to discover the
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 of their minority. In fact, it is really very well for
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teenager to learn about
people
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 in their national
history
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 if more historical exhibition is organized or museum ticket cost is decreased.
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, Minh who is my brother admitted that he and some of his friends very want to join a
history
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 exhibition about heroes of Vietnamese
history
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 at Ho Chi Minh Museum but the cost of the ticket is too expensive,
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 when the cost is decreased, they can join to that exhibition.
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,
Information
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 about
history
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 should appear popularly on the
Internet
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 and social
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 and social
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 should spend more attention on national
history
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.
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,
last
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 month I had homework about
history
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 but I couldn’t find
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 and data on the
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, It has nothing on the
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 and I wished it had more historical formation on the
Internet
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. In conclusion, younger short acknowledge about the
history
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 of the country is a big problem that affects a lot of
people
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 nowadays. It’s mainly caused by the boring way of teaching in schools and the short attention of social
media
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.
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, various solutions can be taken to tackle the issue to reduce the effects it is having on the current society.
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