the charts below show the internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users .

the charts below show the internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users .
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The various uses of the internet by users in the years 2010 and 2011 in Australia, are presented in the charts below,
in addition
to the percentage of the consumers.
Overall
, almost all users made use of emailing in the stated years.
To begin
with, around 60% of internet wanderers scroll on networking apps. It can be seen that the older the age, the less the consumption of social media, with the majority of 15-
24
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year
olds
using it.
In contrast
, only about 20% of
65
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65-year-olds
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year
olds
and above interact with social networking applications.
Thereafter
, no specific trend is shown by the online banking section, as it
initially
rises until 25-
34
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34-year-olds
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year
olds
and
then
gradually drops. The most noteworthy feature is that 60% of 25-
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34-year-olds
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year
olds
use it, which is ranked first for most frequent usage.
Likewise
, slightly above 60% of all users pay their bills online. Emailing is the most consistently used feature of the internet, since all ages, ranging from 15 to over 65, receive or send emails.
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