the charts below show the internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users .

the charts below show the internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users .
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The various uses of the internet by users in the years 2010 and 2011 in Australia, are presented in the charts below,
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to the percentage of the consumers.
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, almost all users made use of emailing in the stated years.
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with, around 60% of internet wanderers scroll on networking apps. It can be seen that the older the age, the less the consumption of social media, with the majority of 15-
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using it.
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, only about 20% of
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65-year-olds
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and above interact with social networking applications.
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, no specific trend is shown by the online banking section, as it
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rises until 25-
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34-year-olds
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and
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gradually drops. The most noteworthy feature is that 60% of 25-
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use it, which is ranked first for most frequent usage.
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, slightly above 60% of all users pay their bills online. Emailing is the most consistently used feature of the internet, since all ages, ranging from 15 to over 65, receive or send emails.

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