Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

It is said raising the

price

of

fuel

is

the

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effective method to tackle

traffic

jams

and contamination issues. I totally agree with

this

statement because

increase

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the

price

of

fuel

will demotivate

people

to

use

their

cars

, which means

less

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fewer

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traffic

jams

and

air

pollution

,

however

, I would like to recommend

alternative

solutions in

order

alleviate

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to alleviate

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this problems

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this problem

these problems

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including,

encourage

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encouraging

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people

to

use

public

transport

, and

promte

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promote

online working. On the one hand, I believe

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apply

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increasing the

price

of

fuel

can contribute to

mitigate

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mitigating

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traffic

congestion

as well as

air

pollution

. Regarding

traffic

jams

,

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an increase

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the

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in the

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price

of petrol can discourage individuals to

use

their vehicles, which means

people

will

use

alternative

transport

namely, trains, buses, and subways.

Therefore

, raising the

price

of

fuel

to contribute

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contributes

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to

reduce

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reducing

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the number of

cars

on our roads, and

help

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helps

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to

easy

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ease

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traffic

.

Furthermore

,

less

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fewer

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cars

on our roads mean less

air

pollution

.

This

is because the most of Co2 emissions

comes

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come

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from using

people

their

cars

.

Consequently

, less

air

pollution

will contribute to

mitigate

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mitigating

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climate change and global warming.

On the other hand

, I would like to suggest

alternative

measures in

order

to

addressing

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address

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the issues related

traffic

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to traffic

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and

pollution

. The first efficient solution,

the

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is the

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government could make

improvments

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improvements

in public

transport

in

order

to incentivize

people

to

use

it rather than

their

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apply

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use

cars

.

For example

, the government can improvements in

order

to make the buses and trains faster and

affordable

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more affordable

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.

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the

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apply

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telecommuting is another effective solution. The government could encourage

the

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companies to allow their employees to work from home.

As a result

,

this

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these

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steps can contribute to

reduce

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reducing

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the number of vehicles , which means

less

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fewer

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traffic

jams

as well as

air

contamination.

To sum up

, I strongly agree with

this

statement because raising the

price

of petrol will demotivate individuals to utilize their

cars

, which means less

traffic

congestion and

air

contamination,

however

, I suggested some

alternative

solutions in

order

mitigate

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to mitigate

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this

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these

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issues namely , encourage

people

to

use

public

transport

, and

promte

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promote

remotely working.