You recently attended a party, where you saw one of the guests being rude to a neighbour in the next house. Write an email to the guest, •Complaining about their behaviour •Suggesting that the guest apologises to the neighbour • Asking them not to behave like this again Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sam, I think I need to write to you because of your inappropriate behaviour at the party

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week. In

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way, you had a very bad mistake in that situation. When I am thinking about

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week I was really embarrassed. Simply because of your aggressive behaviour with miss smith.

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, she just ask you to reduce the sound of the music because of the midnight and she wanted to sleep. But your reaction to her request was really impolite and I was shocked. Regarding possible solutions, you should go to her house and apologize to her because of your bad manner at that party night.

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, it seems better to speak with her face to face.

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, she is older than you and from

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point of view, I believe that she will accept your regret about that action. I

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think that you have to control yourself

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in public spaces.

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, I ask you to well behave with other people and please correct your inappropriate manners. Best wishes. Kambiz

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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