You recently attended a party, where you saw one of the guests being rude to a neighbour in the next house. Write an email to the guest, •Complaining about their behaviour •Suggesting that the guest apologises to the neighbour • Asking them not to behave like this again Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words
Dear Sam,
I think I need to write to you because of your inappropriate behaviour at the party
last
week. In this
way, you had a very bad mistake in that situation.
When I am thinking about last
week I was really embarrassed. Simply because of your aggressive behaviour with miss smith. In addition
, she just ask you to reduce the sound of the music because of the midnight and she wanted to sleep. But your reaction to her request was really impolite and I was shocked.
Regarding possible solutions, you should go to her house and apologize to her because of your bad manner at that party night. Moreover
, it seems better to speak with her face to face. Furthermore
, she is older than you and from this
point of view, I believe that she will accept your regret about that action.
I also
think that you have to control yourself in particular
in public spaces. In addition
, I ask you to well behave with other people and please correct your inappropriate manners.
Best wishes.
KambizSubmitted by kambiz.pirzad on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite