The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018

The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018
The bar chart demonstrates the comparison of how families in a certain region spent 7-days salary in 1968 and 2018.
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, in the past, the most required needs were food and a roof over a hand, but with the coming of a new ,era free-time activity has outraced the mentioned early necessities. In 1968 grocery shopping was the most popular reason for spending money,
such
actions have taken exactly 35% of weekly earned. The leisure, renting and clothes buying were making people spend about 10% of the money on each area. The less desired purchase was the oil or gas for the transport, approximately 6% of the total sum.
However
, the tendency was considerably changed in 2018 ,
thus
, food has lost its previous numbers
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and dropped to the around 15%. At the same time, the demand for hobbies and leisure has increased and reached more than 20% (about 23%) in 2018. Housing has almost doubled its percentage and finance that was spent on
this
need increased to nearly 20%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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