large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sukhwinder Kaur Ranu, a local resident . I would like to express my opinion about the spending options for the local community that you provided in the
last
interview.
After giving the pros of both perspectives , I will explain how sponsoring the team of local children is way more beneficial as compared to the other one in terms of a better future opportunity.
In regards to spending money on local football teams, which will encourage the players to polish their skills and spend more time on outdoor activities . Eventually, it will reduce their screen time as well as
their attention towards drugs . Moreover
, these steps motivate other people to participate in outdoor activities too. In short,it helps in the overall
growth of youngsters.
However
, an open-air concert will attract an audience as well as
sponsors from other places. These concerts will raise a huge amount of funding for the city's development. The collected funds can be used to improve the local school and roads .
In my view, the former is more essential for the future as the young generation is the backbone of a country .
I hope you will understand my view of point.
Thanks for your consideration.
Regards,
SukhwinderSubmitted by ranusukh77 on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.