the diagram below show the life cycle of the Silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagram below show the life cycle of the Silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given illustrations depict some information about silkworms' life cycle and the taken steps in producing a close made by
silk
in two distinct diagrams.
Overall
, as it can ostensibly be seen, there are four steps in almost eighty days for transforming silkworm eggs into mature moths.
However
, silky woven clothes in the second diagram are made during five different stages from cocoons ending with a weave to be dried. Starting with the silkworm figure, at the first step after ten days the eggs of the animal are changed to silkworm larvae by consuming mulberry leaves as a portion of food.
Next,
after four to six weeks in the second stage
silk
threads are ready to be gathered for the textile production. After that, spending almost a week larvas leads to cocoons.
Finally
, after sixteen days the moth which is the adult animal at the
last
point of
this
cycle. The second diagram shows that using
silk
for cloth production has five distinct procedures.
Initially
after selecting
silk
threads, they will be boiled in hot water to unwind to 300 meters to 900 meters thread which is twisted and dyed
otherwise
woven or dyed
at the end
of the process.
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