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The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.

The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.
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The supplied line graph gives information about the GDP in four different countries including Bangladesh , Pakistan, Nepal and Malaysia in
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. As is presented that as can be seen from the graph that each country a slight jump over the period First of all, Malaysia and Pakistan a significant rise in GDP in
billions
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 between 2010 and 2011 to 300 and 200
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respectively
whereas
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 Nepal , we can see
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almost
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 grow between 2010 and 2015
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 Bangladesh observed a small increase from 2010 to 2015 by 75
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, 2011 and 2014 witnessed a marginal climb in Gross Domestic Product in Malaysia to 340
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 afterwards,
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a sharp decline in a year by 40
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 . Pakistan continued after 2011 too and it saw a gradual rise between 2011 and 2015 by 50
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 . There was a gradual growth in GDP in four countries from 2010 to 2015 in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billions, dollar, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product
  • economic performance
  • growth rate
  • stagnation
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • economic boom
  • recession
  • industrial sectors
  • projection
  • fiscal policy
  • economic indicator
  • per capita income
  • purchasing power parity
  • upward trend
  • downturn
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