The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.
The supplied line graph gives information about the GDP in four different countries including Bangladesh , Pakistan, Nepal and Malaysia in
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of US dollar
. As is presented that as can be seen from the graph that each country a slight jump over the period
First of all, Malaysia and Pakistan a significant rise in GDP in Fix the agreement mistake
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Bangladesh observed a small increase from 2010 to 2015 by 75 billion
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On the other hand
, 2011 and 2014 witnessed a marginal climb in Gross Domestic Product in Malaysia to 340 billion
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. Pakistan continued after 2011 too and it saw a gradual rise between 2011 and 2015 by 50 billion
. There was a gradual growth in GDP in four countries from 2010 to 2015 in billions
of US dollar
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