The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the figures
of
foreign travellers, Change preposition
for
seperated
by three different locations, between 1987 and 2007.
Correct your spelling
separated
Overall
, there was a general increase in the number
of visitors
who travelled to the coast and the mountains from 1987 to 2007. However
, the pattern is different for the lakes.
From the graph
we can see that there was an upward trend for the Add a comma
,graph
number
of travellers who to the coast from 38000 in 1992 to 75000 in 2007; similarly
, the number
grows steadily in the moutains
category which increase Correct your spelling
mountain
15000
Change preposition
to 15000
visitors
in 20 years.
The exception to this
general trend upwards was in the laske
category after 2002. In 2002, the Correct your spelling
last
number
of visitors
who travel to the lakes gave the highest with nearly 73000 and this
fall
dramatically to 50 Replace the word
fell
millions
in 2007. Change to singular
million
Finally
, the coast displayed a slight dectrease
of 3000 Correct your spelling
decrease
visitors
between 1987 and 1992.Submitted by harry19980331 on
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