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The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Makecomparisons where relevant. UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Makecomparisons where relevant. UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007
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The given line graph illustrates the measurement of UK
acid
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rain
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 emissions in millions of
tonnes
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, from four energy sectors namely domestic,
transport
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 and
communication
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,
gas
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electricity
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 and
water
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 supplies and other industries from 1990 to 2007. It is noticeable that at the onset of the period, the
gas
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,
electricity
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 and
water
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 supply experienced by far the most increase
of
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acid
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rain
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 emissions and saw
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a drammatic
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drammatic
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 decrease despite some fluctuations
as well as
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other
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the other
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 three sectors
also
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 went through falls during
seventeen
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 years. In 1990, household supplies with
gas
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,
elecrticity
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electricity
 and
water
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 and
transport
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 and
communication
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 contributed to
acid
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rain
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emission
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emissions
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 with large
tonnes
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 above 3 and 2
mln
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 respectively. In spite of stable emissions of
transport
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 and
communication
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,
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gaz
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gas
,
electricity
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 and
water
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 supply sector emitted more than two
mln
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tonnes
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 of
acid
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rain
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 in 1993.
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Gas
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,
electricity
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 and
water
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 supply sector went down and produced almost 1.5
mln
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tonnes
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 of
acid
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rain
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 and fluctuated during a decade and decreased by nearly a
mln
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 tonn of
acid
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rain
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.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
transport
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 and
communication
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 witnessed a
drammatic
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dramatic
 decrease and emitted
acid
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rain
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nearly
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 1.25
mln
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tonnes
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 in 2007. Other industries and domestic
emission
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emissions
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 of
acid
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rain
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 were the lowest
prodution
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production
 in 1991. Other industries emitted
increasingly
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acid
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rain
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 until 1993 and overtook the amount of household supply emission in 2003 and reached the highest
emisson
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emission
emissions
 of
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 in 2007.
Domestic
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The domestic
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 sector decreased
in
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 almost 250
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 of
acid
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rain
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Vocabulary: Replace the words acid, rain, tonnes, transport, communication, gas, electricity, water, mln with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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