The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Makecomparisons where relevant. UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

The given line graph illustrates the measurement of UK

acid

rain

emissions in millions of

tonnes

, from four energy sectors namely domestic,

transport

and

communication

,

gas

electricity

and

water

supplies and other industries from 1990 to 2007. It is noticeable that at the onset of the period, the

gas

,

electricity

and

water

supply experienced by far the most increase

of

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acid

rain

emissions and saw

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a drammatic

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drammatic

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dramatic

decrease despite some fluctuations

as well as

other

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the other

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three sectors

also

went through falls during

seventeen

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the seventeen

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years. In 1990, household supplies with

gas

,

elecrticity

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electricity

and

water

and

transport

and

communication

contributed to

acid

rain

emission

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emissions

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with large

tonnes

above 3 and 2

mln

respectively. In spite of stable emissions of

transport

and

communication

,

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gaz

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gas

,

electricity

and

water

supply sector emitted more than two

mln

tonnes

of

acid

rain

in 1993.

Gas

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The gas

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,

electricity

and

water

supply sector went down and produced almost 1.5

mln

tonnes

of

acid

rain

and fluctuated during a decade and decreased by nearly a

mln

tonn of

acid

rain

.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

,

transport

and

communication

witnessed a

drammatic

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dramatic

decrease and emitted

acid

rain

nearly

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of nearly

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1.25

mln

tonnes

in 2007. Other industries and domestic

emission

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emissions

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of

acid

rain

were the lowest

prodution

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production

in 1991. Other industries emitted

increasingly

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acid

rain

until 1993 and overtook the amount of household supply emission in 2003 and reached the highest

emisson

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emission

emissions

of

acid

in 2007.

Domestic

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The domestic

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sector decreased

in

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by

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almost 250

tonnes

of

acid

rain

.