The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
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The first bar chart illustrates the proportion of the population that owned personal computers during the
period
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between 2002 and 2011,
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the second one compares the indicator by education degree in the initial and ending
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of the data. At first glance,
it is clear that
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there was an upward trend of computer users throughout the
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. In the beginning, in 2002, approximately 65% of the people purchased a computer, afterwards
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estimation rose moderately by a margin of 5% every next year.
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, the percentage reached its highest pick
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of the
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, nearly 75%. It is noticeable that the number of users increased by the level of education.
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, there was a sharp growth of almost 4 times between 2002 and 2010 among people without high school diplomas, and with greater education the gap between the periods reduced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • population demographics
  • educational attainment
  • disparities
  • technological advancement
  • digital divide
  • market penetration
  • socio-economic factors
  • predictive insights
  • statistical significance
  • longitudinal study
  • accessibility
  • affordability
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