The diagram illustrates tthe process of production of olive. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates tthe process of production of olive. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram displays the multi-stage process of producing olive
oil
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
olive grease is made through seven-stage steps from picking up from trees to making
oil
, which is
then
sold in markets. Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the procedure begins when wild olives are picked by humans by their hands.
Then
, the olives are rinsed in the washing machine, using cold water to get rid of impurities. Washed olives are gathered in the smashing machine and broken up into small pieces. These can be either olive paste or olive stones.
Consequently
, olive paste is put into the bag with holes in them.
The next step is
to press those olive pastes inside the bag and produce liquids.
After
this
phase, those liquids are separated into
oil
and water, and
this
grease is now ready to be sold at markets. In the final step, the finished olive
oil
can be sold at markets or stored.
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