This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of owned and rented accommodation houses in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
, it can be seen that flats owned in the countries have a rising trend in the period,
as well as
, the rented properties have a decline variation.
To begin
with, the people in both countries started to buy houses as their accommodation.
Furthermore
, in the
beginning
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only 20 per cent of people started to buy their own flats, but in the middle of the period the trend sparked and humans started to stay in their own houses.
However
, it gradually increased it had a slight drop during 2011.
On the other hand
, the majority of the population chooses their lifestyle in a rental manner.
Firstly
, in 1918, 80 rates of citizens stayed in rental agreements.
Moreover
, the spark has a zig-zag variation in the middle of the time.
However
, it got plummeted in 2001,
besides
that it
manages
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to rise again in 2002 and half of the population was in rental stay in apartments.
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