This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

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The bar chart illustrates the quantity of owned and rented accommodation houses in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Overall

, it can be seen that flats owned in the countries have a rising trend in the period,

as well as

, the rented properties have a decline variation.

To begin

with, the people in both countries started to buy houses as their accommodation.

Furthermore

, in the

beginning

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only 20 per cent of people started to buy their own flats, but in the middle of the period the trend sparked and humans started to stay in their own houses.

However

, it gradually increased it had a slight drop during 2011.

On the other hand

, the majority of the population chooses their lifestyle in a rental manner.

Firstly

, in 1918, 80 rates of citizens stayed in rental agreements.

Moreover

, the spark has a zig-zag variation in the middle of the time.

However

, it got plummeted in 2001,

besides

that it

manages

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to rise again in 2002 and half of the population was in rental stay in apartments.

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This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed beacuse of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Each government and authority gave funding to art society; however, some people including me are strongly of the opinion that this is a type of wasting money and it is not profitable action that all social class can use it.

Government should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities the government encourages the business to move to the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?