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Playing games teaches us about life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Worldwide, most
people
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 are influenced by playing
games
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. Some
people
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 argue that playing
games
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 is not helpful and useless in real life.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 insist that playing
games
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 are meaningful in our life. And I agree with the statement that playing
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 is meaningful. Nowadays, you cannot say that you can continue to live well without playing
games
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. Especially, living together in reality. Many
people
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 insist that individualism is important for everyone in our generation. Maybe the statement is true because we all have different characteristics and we
also
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 have the right to be treated as an individual. But only individualism can cause another social problem.
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, you need to communicate with other
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 unless you are living alone. And we cannot live safely and fair without rules
otherwise
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 our society will be a catastrophe, so the government made rules for living together.
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, we will get a chance that we can assimilate into the association easily through playing
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 with
people
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. In some way, it would help, the earlier you have experienced playing
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 the more you have many benefits.
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, through playing
games
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 you learn the rules.
Such
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 as role-playing
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. If you participate in roleplaying, you receive a role or position that you have to follow,
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 you understand how to do and what to do. In
this
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 way, you acquire it automatically.
Secondly
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, you learn about
competition
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 in playing
games
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. Sadly, there is a lot of
competition
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 everywhere.
Such
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 as university, industry, sports etc. You cannot get better results that you want to achieve without
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. For a specific example, the more salary you acquire some company, the more you should compete with many rivals.
According to
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 a survey,
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 the development of social media, many schools have classes related to role-playing
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 these days. Because smartphones cannot provide real communication, right
competition
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, fairness and teamplay sort of things.
By contrast
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, real playing
games
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 provide opportunities to acquire the right and mature behaviour in our life. In some way, you learn how to world works through playing
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. In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I agree with that statement and I believe, playing
games
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 can be useful and meaningful for individuals and associations.

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