The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the different changes in metal prices which contain
copper
,
nickel
and
zinc
every month in 2014.
It is clear that
the
change
in the price of
nickel
had a dramatic decrease before June and after that,it only rose slowly till December.
However
, the figure for
copper
and
zinc
fluctuated
change
during the year and
finally
,all of them outweighed
nickel
in December. In January, the price of
Nickel
had the highest
change
compared with
last
previous month in
three
metals
,at 6%,and
copper
and
zinc
stood at just under 2%.Over the following six months,all of these
three
metals
dropped considerably.In June,the figure for these
metals
reached the lowest but Nickle was the minimum in
three
metals
which was -3%. After June, the
change
in prices of
Copper
and
Nickel
had a fast increase,which was 1% and -1%.
Then
,after
three
months, figures for these
metals
were all unchanged but in December,
nickel
rose by roughly 1%,and the figure for
Zinc
was up by about 2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, change, three, metals with synonyms.
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