The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph compares the different changes in metal prices which contain

copper

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nickel

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and

zinc

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every month in 2014.

It is clear that

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the

change

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in the price of

nickel

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had a dramatic decrease before June and after that,it only rose slowly till December.

However

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, the figure for

copper

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and

zinc

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fluctuated

change

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during the year and

finally

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,all of them outweighed

nickel

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in December. In January, the price of

Nickel

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had the highest

change

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compared with

last

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previous month in

three

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metals

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,at 6%,and

copper

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and

zinc

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stood at just under 2%.Over the following six months,all of these

three

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metals

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dropped considerably.In June,the figure for these

metals

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reached the lowest but Nickle was the minimum in

three

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metals

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which was -3%. After June, the

change

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in prices of

Copper

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and

Nickel

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had a fast increase,which was 1% and -1%.

Then

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,after

three

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months, figures for these

metals

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were all unchanged but in December,

nickel

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rose by roughly 1%,and the figure for

Zinc

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was up by about 2%.

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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162 words

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