The table below shows percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in China in 2000, 2005, 2010.

The table below shows percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in China in 2000, 2005, 2010.
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The table illustrates the consequence of a survey about five different fields of a university in China in three years 2000, 2005, and 2010.
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it is clear that
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while
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the proportion of pupils giving good ratings for Technical Quality,
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,and Electronic
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rose significantly, the opposite was true for the Range of modules offered.
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, the number of
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resources
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was the highest good voting during the period. In 2000, there was a widespread part of students
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, with 87%, in comparison with 63% voting for Technical Quality and 45% for Electronic
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. Over the next ten years, the percentage of pupils who voted for Technical Quality remained unchanged after 5 years, before rising slightly to 69% in 2010. The statistics for Electronic
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rose by twice times as much as
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of 2010, standing at 89%.
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, nearly the whole votes went
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in 2005 but later fell gradually to 91% in the
last
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year. Looking at the tables in more detail, the quantity of Range of modules offered was the lowest good voting, with only 33%. After that, it kept on dropping to 30% and 26% respectively
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of the period.
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, it is
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noticeable that the Building and Teaching Facilities remained stable at 75% in its data of good rating by the pupils throughout the periods.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • student satisfaction
  • university experience
  • surveys
  • facilities
  • policies
  • cultural factors
  • economic factors
  • expectations
  • perceptions
  • reputation
  • improvement
  • significant increase/decrease
  • influenced
  • aspects
  • ratings
  • trends
  • comparison
  • speculation
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