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say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you 150 words

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Dear [Friend's Name], I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing to you today to express my gratitude for the wonderful time I had visiting you in your beautiful city. My days there were like a rollercoaster of emotions, each one more exhilarating than the
last
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 memories from the trip was our day at the glittering beach. The sun was shining, the waves were crashing, and the sand was warm beneath our feet. We spent hours swimming, sunbathing, and building sandcastles. It was like we were in a tropical paradise. Another highlight of my trip was our visit to the magical forest. The trees were tall and green, and the air was filled with the sound of birdsong. We spent hours hiking through the forest, and I felt like I was in a fairy tale. I felt so comfortable and at home with you. You are
such
 a kind and generous person, and I am so grateful for your friendship. I know that we will be friends for life. I would love for you to visit me in my city someday. I would show you all of my
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 places, and we would have so much fun together. I know you would love it here. I am already looking forward to our next adventure together! With love,
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