The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many people choose a Caribbean
Island
as their holiday destination over a 7 year-period
(2010 – 2017), Correct your spelling
year period
tourists
had the option to stay either on
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in
cruise
shops or on the island
. Overall
, the total number
of tourists
increased significantly over the period of time, however
, there was a shift in the visitors
’ preference between staying on land or on the water.
From 2010 to 2015, the total number
of tourists
experienced a steady rise, jumping from 1 million
to slightly more than 2.5 million
. During this
5 years-period, more visitors
chose to stay on the island
than on cruise
ships. From 2010 to 2011, the number
of on-land visitors
stayed over
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at over
million
, while
on-water visitors
showed a growth, ending 2011 at 0.5 million
.
After 2011, the number
of island
visitors
continued to rise, reaching its peak in 2013 at 1.5 million
, while
the figures cruise
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for cruise
visitors
shrunk, reaching its lowest number
in 2012 but recovering from that year onwards. Starting from 2012, the number
of visitors
staying on ships steadily increased, outnumbering the on-island
figures, which declined since the plateau in 2013, between 2015 and 2016. In 2016 the overall
number
of tourists
spiked, in the end of the recorded period, this
Caribbean Island
was welcoming 3.5 visitors
, out of each 2 million
chose to stay on cruise
ships and 1.5 million
on the island
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