The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many people choose a Caribbean
Island
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as their holiday destination over a 7
year-period
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year period
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(2010 – 2017),
tourists
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had the option to stay either
on
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in
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cruise
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shops or on the
island
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.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
tourists
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increased significantly over the period of time,
however
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, there was a shift in the
visitors
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’ preference between staying on land or on the water. From 2010 to 2015, the total
number
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of
tourists
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experienced a steady rise, jumping from 1
million
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to slightly more than 2.5
million
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. During
this
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5 years-period, more
visitors
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chose to stay on the
island
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than on
cruise
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ships. From 2010 to 2011, the
number
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of on-land
visitors
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stayed
over
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at over
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0.5
million
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,
while
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on-water
visitors
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showed a growth, ending 2011 at 0.5
million
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. After 2011, the
number
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of
island
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visitors
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continued to rise, reaching its peak in 2013 at 1.5
million
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,
while
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the figures
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cruise
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for cruise
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visitors
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shrunk, reaching its lowest
number
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in 2012 but recovering from that year onwards. Starting from 2012, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on ships steadily increased, outnumbering the on-
island
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figures, which declined since the plateau in 2013, between 2015 and 2016. In 2016 the
overall
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number
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of
tourists
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spiked, in the end of the recorded period,
this
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Caribbean
Island
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was welcoming 3.5
visitors
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, out of each 2
million
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chose to stay on
cruise
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ships and 1.5
million
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on the
island
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, tourists, cruise, number, million, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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