The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many people choose a Caribbean
Island
as their holiday destination over a 7 Use synonyms
year-period
(2010 – 2017), Correct your spelling
year period
tourists
had the option to stay either Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
cruise
shops or on the Use synonyms
island
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
increased significantly over the period of time, Use synonyms
however
, there was a shift in the Linking Words
visitors
’ preference between staying on land or on the water.
From 2010 to 2015, the total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
experienced a steady rise, jumping from 1 Use synonyms
million
to slightly more than 2.5 Use synonyms
million
. During Use synonyms
this
5 years-period, more Linking Words
visitors
chose to stay on the Use synonyms
island
than on Use synonyms
cruise
ships. From 2010 to 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of on-land Use synonyms
visitors
stayed Use synonyms
over
0.5 Change preposition
at over
million
, Use synonyms
while
on-water Linking Words
visitors
showed a growth, ending 2011 at 0.5 Use synonyms
million
.
After 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
island
Use synonyms
visitors
continued to rise, reaching its peak in 2013 at 1.5 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
while
the figures Linking Words
Use synonyms
cruise
Change preposition
for cruise
visitors
shrunk, reaching its lowest Use synonyms
number
in 2012 but recovering from that year onwards. Starting from 2012, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on ships steadily increased, outnumbering the on-Use synonyms
island
figures, which declined since the plateau in 2013, between 2015 and 2016. In 2016 the Use synonyms
overall
Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
spiked, in the end of the recorded period, Use synonyms
this
Caribbean Linking Words
Island
was welcoming 3.5 Use synonyms
visitors
, out of each 2 Use synonyms
million
chose to stay on Use synonyms
cruise
ships and 1.5 Use synonyms
million
on the Use synonyms
island
.Use synonyms
Submitted by anacarolduque on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, tourists, cruise, number, million, visitors with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
▼