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Band 4.5

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

#teachers #homework #students #support
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According to
 me, it is very much necessary for
student
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to do
there
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their
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work
 and
i
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 strongly
support
to
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the point that
teacher
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teachers
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 should give
homework
 to students. Specific reason and details to
support
 my answer
is
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 given below. My
support
to
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this
 answer
in
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discribe
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describe
described
blow
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.
Firstly
, the things which
people
 learn in school
is
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are
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 better for them if they
revicese
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revise
.
For example
, if sir will give
work
 to
people
then
 that will help them in
there
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their
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 life. Education works
more
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better if it gets from school
as well as
 home. Homeworks make children more
prefect
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perfect
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. If
institution
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the institution
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 will provide
homework
 daily will help
public
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the public
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 to get more and more knowledge.
Homework
 will help
public
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the public
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.
Secondly
, sir should give less
work
 which can be done easily by the child.
For example
, if
people
dident
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didn't
 do
there
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their
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work
then
 it will be hard for them to learn things easily.
Thirdly
,
child
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the child
a child
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 should do
work
 properly
that
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 it can help her in future. Teachers should provide more knowledge to
people
 about doing new
activity
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activities
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 at free
work
.
Teacher
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Teachers
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 should provide
homework
 like yoga and much more. In conclusion, it is good for children to have
homework
. From
above
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the above
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 data
i
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I
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 strongly
support
to give
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giving
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homeworks
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homework
 to
childrens
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children
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.
Thus
,
homework
 is necessary for student because it
help
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helps
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 them to learn easily.
Hence
, I
support
 to
teacher
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a teacher
the teacher
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for
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in
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 assigning
homeworks
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homework
 to students.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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