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Band 4.5

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Introduction
According to
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student
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students
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to do
there
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their
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work
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 and
i
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 strongly
support
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to
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apply
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the point that
teacher
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teachers
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 should give
homework
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 to students. Specific reason and details to
support
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is
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 given below. My
support
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to
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this
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in
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discribe
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describe
described
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below
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Body paragraph 1
Firstly
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, the things which
people
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is
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 better for them if they
revicese
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revise
.
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, if sir will give
work
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 to
people
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then
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 that will help them in
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their
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 life. Education works
more
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better if it gets from school
as well as
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 home. Homeworks make children more
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perfect
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. If
institution
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the institution
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 will provide
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 daily will help
public
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the public
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 to get more and more knowledge.
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 will help
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the public
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.
Body paragraph 2
Secondly
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, sir should give less
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 which can be done easily by the child.
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, if
people
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dident
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didn't
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their
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work
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then
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 it will be hard for them to learn things easily.
Thirdly
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,
child
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the child
a child
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 should do
work
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 properly
that
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so that
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 it can help her in future. Teachers should provide more knowledge to
people
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 about doing new
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 at free
work
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.
Teacher
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 should provide
homework
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 like yoga and much more.
Conclusion
In conclusion, it is good for children to have
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. From
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 data
i
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 strongly
support
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to give
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giving
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homeworks
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homework
 to
childrens
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children
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.
Thus
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,
homework
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 is necessary for student because it
help
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helps
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 them to learn easily.
Hence
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, I
support
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 to
teacher
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a teacher
the teacher
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for
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in
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 assigning
homeworks
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homework
 to students.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reinforces learning
  • deeper understanding
  • discipline
  • time-management
  • consistent study habits
  • academic performance
  • retention of information
  • student burnout
  • independent learning
  • balanced approach
  • quality over quantity
  • mental health impact
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