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Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new houses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It has been argued that
city
 planners should allocate more greenery spaces in
city
 design
while
 others believe that they should prioritize building housing areas. I strongly agree that adding more houses will be more crucial for the area's development. On the one hand, more green space will improve citizens' quality of life. It has been known that plants contribute to improving air quality and freshen up the ecosystem by absorbing carbon dioxide in the air. Without a doubt,
such
 an environment will reduce the risk of human respiratory issues namely Tuberculosis and ISPA.
Furthermore
, communal green spaces
such
 as
city
 parks and road trees give the opportunity to urban society to be close to nature.
As a result
, the community are able to release stress and anxiety. That's why a natural element in the
city
 is vital for the
city
 population.
On the other hand
, others have said that improving residential construction is more crucial to the
city
's development and I strongly agree with that notion. Housing issues are ubiquitous in urban places
due to
 overcrowding and it is clearly increasing the number of homeless people and the high-cost buildings.
In other words
, more residences that are available will make affordable prices for people to buy their own homes, reducing slump areas and improving their well-being.
For example
, more people relocating from the overcrowded and high-living
city
 of Jakarta to Kalimantan, resulting in the
city
 accelerating two times faster in development.
Thus
, focusing on building new houses is considered to be more important. In conclusion, I believe that accommodating the population is essential because of the urban population.
Government
Correct article usage
The government
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 should consider
this
 measure
while
 determining the organization of those spots.
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