Write to your council about the problem of the road near your home. Explain where you live. Describe the problem. Explain what you want them to do

Dear Councillor, I hope you are well. I live in

Ward - 9

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Ward-9

on Alia Madrasha

Road

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and

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also live

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have been living

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almost 10 years.My house is

nearby

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near

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the place.

where

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Where

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we live now

the

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, the

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road

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condition is very bad .It is so difficult to move on the

road

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by vehicle.

Due to

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last

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the last

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,rain

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rain,rain

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someplace

has

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have

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hole

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holes

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and

dent

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dents

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had

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that have

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also

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filled

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been filled

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up by

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with

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water. Sometimes it is so risky for children when they

went

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to school.

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Therefore

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Therefore,

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it is too dangerous for old people.

some

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Some

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days

ago

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ago,

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my grandfather fell

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into

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a hole at night when he went to the mosque. After

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apply

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that

his

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, his

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leg

has broken

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broke

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.On the other

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apply

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hand

there

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, there

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are no lights on the

road

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where

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whereas

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we are troubled to move at night in the dark. I hope that you understand our pain. So I would request you take the initiative to make the

road

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and

also

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ensure

road

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lights in the area.

arjewel27

Jul 22, 2023

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task response

Be clear and brief. Start with where you live. Then state the problem. Finish with what you want and by when.

coherence cohesion

Link ideas in a simple line. Use one idea in each sentence and one idea per paragraph.

content

The letter shows care for safety of children and old people.

tone

The tone is polite and respectful.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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