The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The bar chart above describes the changes in a Country's exported goods from 2015 to 2016. The materials studied are petroleum
products
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, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural
products
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as well as
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textiles. From a first survey of the findings, the levels of
export
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of each commodity did not vastly change in the selected time period. Petroleum
products
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remain the most exported of the group, achieving a 3% increase in their
export
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value in 2016. Engineered goods and agricultural
products
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see an increase in their
export
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as well, the former scoring an 8.5% growth and the latter an 0.81%.
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, the product whose
export
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value skyrocketed in 2016, compared to 2015, is textiles, which achieve a 15.24% increase. The only negative change shown by the results regards the
export
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of gems and jewellery, which decreases by 5.18% in 2016.
Overall
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, the Country's
export
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value did not change significantly over the indicated time frame.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, export with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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