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Palstic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem ?

#palstic #bags #plastic #bottles #environment #damage #governments #individuals
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last
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 decades
usage
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plastic
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 material in the form of bags, bottles and food packaging has been upsurged by leaps and bounds, which creates
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harmful effects on
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nature. It will not only damage
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the eco-system
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eco-system
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ecosystem
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 but
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dangerous
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 for human health.
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, some measures can be taken by using recycled material as an individual or to put
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 on it by the authorities.
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lights
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 on many damages
can
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that can
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 be
cused
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caused
used
 by
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usage
 of
platic
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plastic
material
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materials
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on
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the
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nature. Primarily, It has
direct
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 impact on
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human's
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human
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 life. To
elaboarte
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elaborate
, as
people
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 are using water, foods and
cosmatics
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cosmetic
 things in
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plastic
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 container, so
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reaserch
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research
 in
a
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 long run it creates various diseases in humans.
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, respiratory diseases, cancer or skin infection.
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, It
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also
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for
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eco system
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ecosystem
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, as
a
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plastic
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 is
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a non-biodigradable
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non-biodigradable
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non-biodegradable
non-bio degradable
 material which
diaposed
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disposed
 in the ocean so marine life would eat
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 material, from the food chain
agian
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again
 it comes to the other animals or humans, which means indirectly we are eating the substance of the plastics in our daily life. Not only
it
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 harmful
for
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 lively things, but
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 when the
plastic
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is disposed
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disposed
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 by fire, it
destoryes
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destroyed
destroys
 the forest or other green items by
spreding
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spreading
 polluting air.
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,
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usage
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the usage
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 of
this
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 kind of material is dangerous for the whole
environments
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environment
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. In
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 some measures can be addressed, which can be taken individually or by the government. As far as Individual
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,
fitsly
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firstly
fitly
,
people
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 should stop the
usage
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 of the
palstic
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plastic
 material by
sperading
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spreading
self awareness
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.
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,
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pastic
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plastic
 material,
people
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 could have used paper,
galss
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glass
 or steel material, which is biodegradable and has
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negligible
detriorate
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deteriorate
 effects on the
enviornment
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environment
. On the government side, The authority should encourage
business
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businesses
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 to make reusable and recycled
material
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materials
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 for making bottles, bags or
container
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containers
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 and not to make
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plastic
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one
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.
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, the government could put
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a firm
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fine
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 or banned on to
create
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 or
usage
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 of
this
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 kind of material in the
goble
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global
 markets.
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, through the media, the governments should
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 raise
awraness
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awareness
 among the
people
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why
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about why
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 they should not
to
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use
these kind
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 of materials any more. In conclusion,
usage
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 of the
plastic
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are
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 creating harmful effects on the planet's
eco-systems
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ecosystems
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 by
sperading
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spreading
 diseases and extinct natural resources.
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, as public, stop
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usage
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this
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platics
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plastics
plastic
 products,
instead
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one
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 and spreading awareness and
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banning
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such
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type
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types
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 of
pastics
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plastics
plastic
product
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products
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 would help to save our natural
resoursces
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resources
 and human lives in future.
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