You are going on holiday and have just remembered that your aunt lives in one of the cities you will be visiting. Write a letter to your aunt. In your letter: Tell her about your holiday plans Ask if you can stay with her for a portion of the trip Explain how you will make it up to her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear aunt sally, I trust you are in good health and spirit. I have been missing you a lot lately. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am having a holiday in Salisbury next month. Actually ,it is related to my current project of the work so it is a kind of vacation from work. I will be going there with my workmates. I have been so excited to tell you that the place I will be going to on the 5th of next month is really near to your abode. The concert will start at 6 pm so if you are available I can come to your place the night prior and we can spend time with each other. I am planning to bring homemade cookies made by me and to be honest, I stole that recipe from you. I will tell you about it in person.

Additionally

, I was

also

thinking of going to that museum you told me I think it is an interesting place and I would love to go with you there. Believe me, I was on cloud nine when I got to know that I can see you soon after

such

a long time. I have got a night and a half day so probably we can do anything you want. Hope to see you soon. Yours loving Payal

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

228 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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many people think that to become a successful specialist, it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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