Mrs Barrett, an English speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for somene to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. in your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am

Shishank

Correct your spelling

Shashank

Amte, residing on Paenela Ave, which is next to your society. I am writing

this

letter in regard to the

job

posting as a helping hand in your home. As I am living in the same area you are, so I thought it would be great to be an applicant for

this

job

. I am an undergraduate student at waterloo university, I have time off

this

summer from my study. I can help you with many types of household activities,

such

as grass cutting, garage cleaning, cleaning the house and pet caring.

Last

summer, not only I did do some of these tasks in the hotel, but

also

I have experience in these tasks at my home.

Thus

, I think it would be better to help you. Now, I have a vacation for 2 months from

this

April to the end of

this

June. My next semester would start on the 7th of July

this

year.

Moreover

, I have one part-time

job

as a waiter in the days-in hotel, and now which is only gives me a few hours a week because it is a seasonal one.

Due to

the same, I have decided to find another part-time

job

to earn money in order to pay my overhead expenses.

Furthermore

, I will be available from 3 pm to 6 pm in the evening every day, because I am occupying myself in the morning with my other part-time

job

at a hotel. I would like to help you with your housework if you give me an opportunity. In anticipation of your favourable response in

this

regard. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Shishank Amte

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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1Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

277 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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