Mrs Barrett, an English speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for somene to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. in your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am
Shishank
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Shashank
Amte, residing on Paenela Ave, which is next to your society. I am writing
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letter in regard to the
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posting as a helping hand in your home. As I am living in the same area you are, so I thought it would be great to be an applicant for
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job
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. I am an undergraduate student at waterloo university, I have time off
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summer from my study. I can help you with many types of household activities,
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as grass cutting, garage cleaning, cleaning the house and pet caring.
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summer, not only I did do some of these tasks in the hotel, but
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I have experience in these tasks at my home.
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, I think it would be better to help you. Now, I have a vacation for 2 months from
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April to the end of
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June. My next semester would start on the 7th of July
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year.
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, I have one part-time
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as a waiter in the days-in hotel, and now which is only gives me a few hours a week because it is a seasonal one.
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the same, I have decided to find another part-time
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to earn money in order to pay my overhead expenses.
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, I will be available from 3 pm to 6 pm in the evening every day, because I am occupying myself in the morning with my other part-time
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at a hotel. I would like to help you with your housework if you give me an opportunity. In anticipation of your favourable response in
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regard. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Shishank Amte
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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