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Some people want cars to be banned from city centers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #cars #city #centers
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
city
 traffic around urban areas.It is undeniable that transport vehicles become
essential
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 part of our life.
However
,there is no absolute agreement on whether
cars
 should be banned or not. A commonly held belief is that commuting in the
city
 can not be performed without transport vehicles.As evidence of
this
 , they point to the huge range of cities,that remains no choice but to get point at far distances.
Furthermore
,
cars
 serve as an
accompanier
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of
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 the owner.It could be explained by the fact that automobiles ensure your safety
while
 transporting on
it
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.
As a result
 ,it leads to saving much time and reaching your point in integrity.
On the other hand
,some people claim that an overwhelming number of machines make the
city
 polluted with their various outputs.
For example
,they may mention that the majority of transports use as fuel petrol
gasolines
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gasoline
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 which increase methane proportion in the air.
In addition
,all road traffic events
such
 as traffic jams and car accidents often cause noise surrounding.The explanation lies in the fact that transport engine exports loud sounds
while
 moving at once,which usually take place at cross areas.
Therefore
,
cars
 disturb and establish discomfort for
city
 centre habitants. In conclusion,taking everything mentioned into account,I would argue that there is no need to deprive
cars
from
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 the
city
 centre.Because the logistical role of vehicles is tremendous,
,
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however
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 there are newly devised
cars
 which are more quiet and ecological than nowadays's.
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