You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are selling - bed, moved to new place, 1 bedroom, spare, • describe the furniture - made from best quality wood, have bought it from Karan Furnitures which is famous for its quality, mattresses also, detachable drawers on both sides where you can keep stuff • suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture - free over weekend, can come and see the condition, if fine can take along, know some of the movers n packers,

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Dear Matt, I'
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writing to let you know that I'
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selling a bed which I no longer use and I think you might like to buy it from me. I've got a new job in Gurgaon which is why I'
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shifting to a new flat there. It's a small apartment and has one bedroom only.
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, I have two beds.
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, I think of selling one bed as I don't have that much space in my new apartment. I bought it 3 years back from Karan Furniture which is famous for its high-quality wood. You can take a mattress
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if you want. It has two detachable drawers on each side of the bed where you can keep personal and handy stuff. I'
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in a 5-day working job and generally free over the weekend. So, if you like, you can come and see the condition of the bed on the weekend. I
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have contact numbers of some of the reliable Movers and Packers in our area in case you'd like to take the bed along. All the best. Keep in touch. Divya
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