The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016
The presented chart illustrates the average of visitors who came to “birth control, eye, diabetic, and dental” departments every week between 2010 and 2016 in a hospital.
Generally speaking, “birth control” and “eye” are
two
clinics that had the highest concern compared to the rest. In addition
, “eye” and “ diabetic” are two
areas that had a significant increase in comparison between the first year and the last
year on the graph.
“Birth control” started with the highest which was approximately 245. Two
years later, its number increased to about 275 and then
declined rapidly in 2014. Eventually, it ended up with a similar number as 2010. “Eye” began with around 125, went up slightly in 2012, and rose quickly to approach 350 people. In the middle of 2013 and 2014, the was one time, these two
clinics approached the same number.
The similarity of “birth control”, “dental”
in 2010 reached 100 people, and in 2016, it reached about 125. “Diabetic” is quite similar to the trend of “eye” but it changed more steadily. In 6 years, there were 3 times that “diabetic” and “dental” got the same visitors.Correct word choice
and “dental”
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