You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,

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Dear Mr Clark, I’m writing

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letter regarding the date we agreed I would start working at your company as a new administrative assistant.

First,

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I would like to say I am deeply sorry to inform

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will not be able to start next Monday as we had arranged. Yesterday, as I was driving back home from the gym, a van went through the red light and hit my car. The impact was so strong that I immediately lost consciousness. Fortunately, the paramedics arrived quickly. I was taken to the hospital where they detected I have a broken ankle. I admit I feel relieved since the situation could be much more serious.

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, I will not be able to walk for the next three weeks.

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, I would like to ask you if it is possible to postpone the beginning of my training for a month, so I can fully recover. I can send all the medical documents to the Human Resources department to justify my request, if necessary. Yours faithfully, Mark Johnson

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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