In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
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stories
book
and even digital entertainment Fix the agreement mistake
books
such
as TV dramas in many countries. This
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is becoming more trendy in Change the determiner
phenomenon
young
generation. The following essay will elaborate Add an article
the young
the
reason behind the aforementioned trend and give Change preposition
on the
personal
perspective regarding Correct article usage
a personal
this
phenomena
.
The majority of crime-related stories are considered Fix the agreement mistake
phenomenon
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an intriguing Change preposition
apply
entertainmet
, giving the readers or audiences Correct your spelling
entertainment
chance
to think, act as a detective, and even judge the perpetrators to source the rights for the victim. To illustrate, Correct article usage
a chance
comparing
to other genres Wrong verb form
compared
such
as romance, horror and thriller, crime-plot
story is embodied in Add an article
the crime-plot
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adolescents’
every day
life and can cultivate a number of Replace the word
everyday
lesson
learns to protect themself or Change to a plural noun
lessons
relatives
from any criminal Correct pronoun usage
their relatives
acts
.
In addition
, in my opinion
types of illegal Add the comma(s)
,opinion
acts
have been growing in recent years. Ten years ago many unlawful actions completed by criminals to citizens were bribery, theft, embezzlement, and homicide. In
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On
contrary
, Correct article usage
the contrary
this
digital era brings criminals to become scammer
, or even do illegal Fix the agreement mistake
scammers
acts
electronically such
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interest
to know the root cause of the problem and challenge themself to break the black box. The author personally Wrong verb form
interested
indulge
many young Change the verb form
indulges
generations
to learn any types of criminal acts
by reading books or even watching dramas and aware
of their surroundings.
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being aware
To conclude
, many young generations
tend to choose crime
genre as entertainment because of the uniqueness of Correct article usage
the crime
story
, Correct article usage
the story
unpredictable
plot. Not only as a source of entertainment, the author believes Correct word choice
and unpredictable
this
genre can bring many lesson
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lessons
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learned
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