In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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age, a plethora of crime genre

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have been widely distributed through published

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and even digital entertainment

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as TV dramas in many countries.

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is becoming more trendy in

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generation. The following essay will elaborate

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reason behind the aforementioned trend and give

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. The majority of crime-related stories are considered

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an intriguing

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to think, act as a detective, and even judge the perpetrators to source the rights for the victim. To illustrate,

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to other genres

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as romance, horror and thriller,

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story is embodied in

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life and can cultivate a number of

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learns to protect themself or

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from any criminal

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types of illegal

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have been growing in recent years. Ten years ago many unlawful actions completed by criminals to citizens were bribery, theft, embezzlement, and homicide.

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digital era brings criminals to become

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, or even do illegal

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electronically

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as revenge porn, and many more. Those illustrations make more young

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to know the root cause of the problem and challenge themself to break the black box. The author personally

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many young

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to learn any types of criminal

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by reading books or even watching dramas and

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of their surroundings.

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, many young

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tend to choose

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genre as entertainment because of the uniqueness of

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unpredictable

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plot. Not only as a source of entertainment, the author believes

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genre can bring many

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

271 words

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phenomenon
intrigue
enigma
compelling
addictive
chilling
forensics
procedural
thriller
suspense
psychological
criminalistics
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intricate
red herrings
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catharsis
moral ambiguity
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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

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Many social media accounts are fake What problems does ths cause? What Solatons can you suget?

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