If people go to live in another country, they should follow the local customs and traditions. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In globalization today, some
people
have chosen a new
country
to live in. But different countries have different cultures and different
traditions
.
People
should follow some rules like the old tradition or laws
from
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that
country
. And
that is
respect for the local
people
.
People
have some lifestyle from their original
country
when they move from their new
country
to
life
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. In my view, it should be kept and exported.
For example
, America is a majority
country
for Chinese
people
to move in, but most
people
don't like simple food from America, like burgers, sandwiches or steaks. So they will cook Chinese food in their home. I agree with
people
keeping their lifestyle. And as I know some states in America, most local
people
will celebrate the Chinese spring festival. It is
culture
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export successful. When you become a new migrant,
first,
you should know the
country
's local culture and
their
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its
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traditional lifestyle. And
second,
don’t
ignore their inhibition rules.
For example
, the Indians do not eat beef, and the Arabs do not eat
the
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pork that we should follow. So when you talk with your Indian friend or
neighbor
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, you
don’t
talk about a new steak restaurant or Big Mac from McDonald's. But honestly, the important thing is
don’t
break the local laws.
Therefore
, I agree that
people
should follow the local customs and
traditions
.
Overall
,
people
who follow the local
traditions
should be
first,
but we
also
don’t
forget our
traditions
and
it
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can be kept in the new
country
without not breaking the local customs and
traditions
.
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