The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside 

for the environment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside on the local environment. In the first stage, occurs 'trampling' (flattening of grass under the feet of tourists walking in the area), which causes harm to the
vegetation
and compacts the
soil
so it becomes hard underfoot.
Next,
damaged plants become weaker, hard
soil
doesn't allow the air and water to easily pass through to supply the needs of plants, and
thus
they can not effectively reproduce and grow.
As a consequence
of that,
vegetation
is reduced. Compaction of the
soil
also
causes increased amounts of erosion: as the water can not soak into the ground it runs off the land, creating landslides that destroy trees and other
vegetation
,
while
also
depriving plants
from
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necessary water. All mentioned above ultimately leads to decreased
overall
quality of
soil
and reduced amounts of
vegetation
.
This
in turn causes harm to the local biodiversity.
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