The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of uneducated males and females rate from six different regions of the world for the past year.
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, South Asia had the highest number of illiterate men and women than any other country,
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developed nations' citizens were the most educated ones. The Developed country ladies,
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,gentlemen were below 10 per cent. Their male illiteracy ratio experienced a more than 35-fold increase than that of the South Asian inhabitants.
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, roughly 2% of females were non-illiterate individuals and showed (57%) 55 times more than South Asian people. The developed countries, Latin America or
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known as the Caribbean, and East Asia or Oceania had the lowest proportion of uneducated genders which were below 20 per cent. The three majority literacy levels Sub-Saharan, Arab States, and South Asia had around 31%, 29%, and 34% of males. In the same way, Females accounted for approximately 48%, 52%, and 55% respectively .There were around 20% more literacy statistics for men than the opposite gender(women) throughout the period.
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  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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