The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart gives a breakdown of the result of a questionnaire about
people
’s coffee
and tea consuming and purchasing habits in five specific Australian cities: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall
, the number of people
to go a café for coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks was the highest point in all of cities
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the cities
while
those of people
to buy fresh coffee
was the
lowest point in the same period.
Change preposition
at the
Whereas
the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
people
to go caffe for both of them almost experienced above a ratio of 55% in all cities, excepting
Adelaide. Those of Adelaide had slightly the same ratio as Wrong verb form
except
people
buying instant coffee
(around 50%).
To buy
fresh Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
, the number of people
had the lowest point (about 32%) in Brisbane while
its
the highest ratio was 44% in Sydney.Correct pronoun usage
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