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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He or she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * Describe some possible disadvantages * Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Saeed, I wish you are right and have a good
time
. I heard you are going to go on a camping holiday for the first
time
this
 summer. I was happy about the issue because it is vital for you after finishing the English course. I will hope you enjoy your holiday, to be honest, I think that you have to go with your family.
However
, there are a lot of dangers throughout the journey, and you may encounter climate problems. In my opinion, before you go out of your hometown, you will consider the weather conditions.
Also
, you choose a suitable place where it will be a pleasant experience and unforgettable. To tell you the truth, recently I was depressed during studying English. Because I could not go anywhere,
while
 of all
time
 I am busy. Now I like to come to camping on holiday with you
this
 summer. If you accept my suggestion, I will assure you of coming with you. Thank you for taking the
time
 to read my letter. best regard, Amin
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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