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1.Every year more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus. Why do you think students prefer to study online? What can universities do to attract students to study on campus?

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Nowadays, a great number of students prefer to study online rather than be at traditional
lessons
 on campus. In my opinion, they tend to learn
with
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technological
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 way, as it has convenience and flexibility;
however
, by offering new advantages and entertainment, universities can allure youngsters to participate in campus
lessons
.
This
 essay will explain it with its
broaden
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 meaning. To
intoduce
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introduce
, in
current
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 day scenario,
by
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growing
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 of technology, people use it almost in every field,
as well as
, students join
lessons
 via educational platforms,
such
 as Microsoft Teams and Zoom. Especially, after
pandemic
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a pandemic
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 period, people
has
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 started to
interested
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 in studying remotely.
Moreover
, those who would rather attend classes
with
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 video call, claim that they are able to control their daily schedule.
Therefore
, if school-goers take part in networked lectures, they can save not only their time
,
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 but
also
 their money. To illustrate, for going
university
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, most freshmen use public transport, even some of them
lives
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 far off
education
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the education
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 complex and they spend too much cash
for
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on
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 vehicles.
On the other hand
, by attending university, adolescents may gain various skills, like broadening horizontals, being sociable and having
self-confident
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.
For
this
 reason, institutes should organize activities or they can give chance to students to choose their
lessons
, schedules and even teachers independently.
For instance
, in
Japan
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 juveniles have
right
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the right
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 to pick up their own sessions and professors. At the same time, they have some organizations, like choosing directors from among teenagers. In a nutshell, though
young
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 aged population would like to continue their education life with technological devices for
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comfortable conditions, universities have to create
environment
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 to collect them into auditories, because of its aforementioned advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance learning
  • E-learning platform
  • Virtual classroom
  • Self-paced study
  • Asynchronous/synchronous sessions
  • Digital resources
  • Webinars and online workshops
  • Interactive content
  • Educational technology
  • Campus amenities
  • Student engagement
  • Collaborative learning
  • Social integration
  • Networking opportunities
  • Experiential learning
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