You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter – describe the training course you want to do – explain what the company could do to help you – say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Sir, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing
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letter to express my interest in the new advertisement that caught my attention on
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about a training
course
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. Allow me to elaborate
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the
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Firstly
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, the
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focuses
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how
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Artificial
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intelligence
. As an esteemed international
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, we provide services in designing materials for other companies or clients
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as posters,
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, and logos.
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, the
course
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is
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skill which is quite demanding worldwide and the training session would be a month. I would greatly appreciate the
company
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's assistance
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in
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funding the
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fee.
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, it involves a
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investment.
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, I kindly request
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the
company
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's support in helping me to cover the training. It would be beneficial to our
company
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, as I am proficient in using design software like Adobe Photoshop and Illustrator,
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can
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them using
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AI.
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, I can assure you that it will attract potential customers globally, who will appreciate our
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designs. Thank you for considering my request. I am looking forward to your reply. Warm regards, Jun
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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