You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter – describe the training course you want to do – explain what the company could do to help you – say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the new advertisement that caught my attention on
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about a training
course
. Allow me to elaborate
about
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the
course
.
Firstly
, the
course
focuses
about
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on
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how
utilize
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Artificial
Inteligence
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intelligence
. As an esteemed international
company
, we provide services in designing materials for other companies or clients
such
as posters,
fliers
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flyers
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, and logos.
Furthermore
, the
course
is
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a sough-after
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skill which is quite demanding worldwide and the training session would be a month. I would greatly appreciate the
company
's assistance
to
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in
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funding the
course
fee.
Moreover
, it involves a
significants
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significant
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investment.
Therefore
, I kindly request
for
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the
company
's support in helping me to cover the training. It would be beneficial to our
company
, as I am proficient in using design software like Adobe Photoshop and Illustrator,
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can
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them using
the
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AI.
Additionally
, I can assure you that it will attract potential customers globally, who will appreciate our
uniqueness
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designs. Thank you for considering my request. I am looking forward to your reply. Warm regards, Jun
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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