A friend of yours is thinking of going on camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would line to go camping with your friend thi summer
Dear Ahmed,
I
have
received your letter Unnecessary verb
apply
last
week and came to know that you are planning for camping holiday
this
summer. I am really thrilled to hear about your plan and certainly believe that you have made a
right choice.
As you are aware that I had been Correct article usage
the
to
Change preposition
on
this
camping holiday
in
Change preposition
apply
last
summer, therefore
can assure you that this
will be one
of yours
exciting Correct the word
your
holiday
. There will be many activities for you and your family to enjoy, Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
for
instance
Add the comma(s)
,instance
one
of my most
favourite Correct quantifier usage
apply
one
was Correct pronoun usage
ones
sand
buggy, Correct article usage
the sand
this
buggy you have to drive yourself over Change preposition
in this
very
rugged sandy and rocky track. Another Correct article usage
a very
fun filled
activity is the bonfire and barbecue which the tour operator will arrange for you, for me it was indeed Add a hyphen
fun-filled
very
memorable activity with mouthwatering food. Based on these facts, I strongly recommend you Correct article usage
a very
to
carry out Fix the infinitive
apply
with
your plan.
Change preposition
apply
On the
contrary
there are some disadvantages which you need to be aware of. Add a comma
,contrary
One
of the big issue
I faced was Change to a plural noun
issues
rain water
which ruined our enjoyment on that particular day. Correct your spelling
rainwater
However
Add a comma
,However
this
is the part of the camping holiday
and you need to turn this
into some kind of enjoyment. In addition
to that another issues
was Replace the adjective
issue
continues
nagging of mosquitoes, Replace the word
continuous
this
one
must be taken care by
having some medicated creams and repellents.
Change preposition
of by
Also
I am really thankful to you for inviting me for Add a comma
,Also
this
trip, however
due Add the comma(s)
,however
my
official engagements, it would not be possible for me to join you. I know that I am going to miss Change preposition
to my
this
adventure a lot. Wish you good luck and I hope it will be one
of yours
memorable Correct the word
your
trip
, in case of any Fix the agreement mistake
trips
query
I am always available to answer.
Warm regards,
Faseeh KhanFix the agreement mistake
queries
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite