A friend of yours is thinking of going on camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would line to go camping with your friend thi summer

Dear Ahmed, I

have

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received your letter

last

week and came to know that you are planning for camping

holiday

this

summer. I am really thrilled to hear about your plan and certainly believe that you have made

a

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right choice. As you are aware that I had been

to

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this

camping

holiday

in

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last

summer,

therefore

can assure you that

this

will be

one

of

yours

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exciting

holiday

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. There will be many activities for you and your family to enjoy,

for

instance

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one

of my

most

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favourite

one

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was

sand

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the sand

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buggy,

this

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buggy you have to drive yourself over

very

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rugged sandy and rocky track. Another

fun filled

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activity is the bonfire and barbecue which the tour operator will arrange for you, for me it was indeed

very

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memorable activity with mouthwatering food. Based on these facts, I strongly recommend you

to

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carry out

with

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your plan.

On the

contrary

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there are some disadvantages which you need to be aware of.

One

of the big

issue

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I faced was

rain water

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which ruined our enjoyment on that particular day.

However

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this

is the part of the camping

holiday

and you need to turn

this

into some kind of enjoyment.

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to that another

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was

continues

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nagging of mosquitoes,

this

one

must be taken care

by

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having some medicated creams and repellents.

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I am really thankful to you for inviting me for

this

trip,

however

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due

my

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official engagements, it would not be possible for me to join you. I know that I am going to miss

this

adventure a lot. Wish you good luck and I hope it will be

one

of

yours

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memorable

trip

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, in case of any

query

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I am always available to answer. Warm regards, Faseeh Khan