The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graphs provide information on the

percentage

of online shopping in comparison between 2005 and 2010,

along with

each category.

Overall

, the

percentage

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each category is nearly the same in the different 5 years. In 2005, the majority of electronics and appliances were about 35%, but

this

percentage

was

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dropped to 30% by 2010. During the next 5 years period, as shown

as

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increasing number of people chose to purchase food & beverage online, which increases

about

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10

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, which is jumping to the largest

overall

proportion of

online

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market. At 25

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of home furnishings were bought in Canada in the year 2005.

However

, the number had fallen down to 15

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, by 2010.

Moreover

, the interesting fact is that

the

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video games were more popular than home furnishings in 2010, but the

percentage

is still 23

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, which is 5

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more than

the

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last

5 years.