You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord, In your letter •Explain the situation • Describe why it bothers you • Suggest a solution
I am Puneet Kaur, a tenant in your apartment, located at Smart Vaughan
Metropolitican
Center. Needless to emphasis, there Correct your spelling
Metropolitan
has
been no complaints from the Correct subject-verb agreement
have
time
I moved in. Recently, I was
encountered Unnecessary verb
apply
by
some Change preposition
apply
problem
and was looking for a positive response from your side.
Even Though Aman is a nice person yet he always plays very loud music Fix the agreement mistake
problems
specially
during the Replace the word
especially
night
Correct your spelling
nighttime
time
. Inspite
of getting warned, my housemate commits Correct your spelling
In spite
same
mistake every Change the article
the same
time
.
Being an international student, I do
not only have classes in Unnecessary verb
apply
morning
but Add an article
the morning
also
work during afternoon
. Add an article
the afternoon
Additionally
, Aman does hold noisy party
all night, making it difficult for me to take rest.
Honestly, I do not have any problem if Aman can reduce the noise caused by the drums or if he can limit the Fix the agreement mistake
parties
time
of the get together
till 11 :30 at night.
Hoping, my issues would be addressed as soon as possible.Add a hyphen
get-together
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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